In 4-5, we are writing food memoirs of our memories of good food. This is connected to our bigger theme of Local Foods! In Writing Workshop, we read a lot of books about memories around food. Then we brainstormed ideas of what our topics could be, and when we had an idea, we jotted it down in our lifebooks. We also wrote on a sea of talk, sharing stories with our voice, to use descriptive words. We want to make Tim’s mouth water. ( Not our fault, he asked us to! ) After we start a draft, we can keep writing in our journals or start using an ipad or computer to type up our drafts. After we typed up our draft, we would send it to Tim. He would edit it and give us feedback on our drafts. (Sylvie had to do that part THREE times!) Tim is always telling us : Show, don’t tell! Slow down the hot spots! Test out new beginnings!” Over and over and over and over…. and over again! So we have to do that very carefully so that he doesn’t tell us again. When we get to a comfortable draft, we can sta...
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ReplyDeleteMy name is David, and I am a teacher in Dover, NH. I teach students in k-4. I am working with first graders to learn about rocks, second graders to learn about weather, and third graders to learn about landfills. All three of those are affected by the water cycle. In our town we have many mills that used water power to run their industries until the Civil War. Are there mills in your area?
I am also about to get some iPads for my students, and loved seeing how you used Educreations to show what you learned.
I look forward to reading more about your class's work!
Thanks for sharing,
David
There are some mills around us. Our school is in a city called Portland but many of us live somewhere else. Some of those towns have mills. The Bates Mills in Lewiston/Auburn, mills in Brunswick, one in Jay, and some in Biddeford.
ReplyDeleteThank you for liking our blog entry. Have you started using iPads with your students? We like Educreations, Pop Math, Slice It, Math Drills, 123D Sculpt, and Sparkle Fish just to name a few.
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