I think that the poem is cool to listen to because the boy is exaggerating how bright the orange is. I like that the poet makes that part exciting. AH
I liked that this poem sounded like a story. It had detail but not too much. It was just the right amount. VM
It was nice that the lady sold the candy even though the boy did not have enough money. I thought that was the heartbeat of the poem. IC
I think that the heartbeat was that the boy was on his first date with the girl. DH
I liked that the last line said the orange was like a fire in his hand. We are talking about similes in WW and this is one. SC
What do you think about the poem? What do you like?

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