We are having fun in WW. We have learned new kinds of poems and are listening to poems that are in books. Here are more of our poems.
STREAMS
the wavy splashy song of a stream.
The sounds that make me beam.
the super secrets of the day are nothing to be seen.
when i sink down low into this stream.
right then i realize it is just a dream.
by Liam A.
Spring Is coming
Awakening the earth
The birds are humming
The World's rebirth
The Flowers are blooming
The Snow is leaving
The colors are booming
The sun is beaming
Spring is definitely coming
By Jaden
We are learning about Triolets. I tried to make one today.
I don’t know what to write
by charlie l.
I don’t know what to write
I think I will take a break
I will have a sprite
I don’t know what to write
maybe I will have a bite
ooh I have a headache
I don’t know what to write
I think i will take a break
I made these free verse poems in writing workshop in school.
- Iris
Horse
I am a horse beautiful and swift
gliding smoothly across the field,
dusk dances on my tail while the wind curls around my amber sienna silk colored hair,
rain trickles off my wavy mane,
and my hooves gallop and tear up the moonlit grass.
Fox
I am a fox mysterious and swift
prancing along the snow
with my tangerine fire slik coat
and my deep brown eyes
within secrets untold
Iris nice work... I especially liked the Horse... wow....
ReplyDeleteVery nice descriptive poetry
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