In writing workshop, Tim and Nancy gave us Dove chocolates to eat and write about.
We did two drafts about the chocolate. Our first draft was "shallow digging". We ate the chocolate and then we wrote about it but we didn't notice much because we didn't practice. Then our second draft we used more detail and descriptive words. Tim and Nancy had us stop for each step so we couldn't eat it right away. We had to look, listen, watch, feel, and then eat. It was really fun eating and writing about the chocolate.
Diego and Yacob
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